Thursday, September 5, 2013

Five Minute Friday: Red


Linking up this Friday with the beautiful Lisa Jo Baker. You can join in the fun too! Just read below to find out how:


1. Write for 5 minutes flat for pure unedited love of the written word.
2. Link back here and invite others to join in. Here’s how.
3. Be generous and leave an encouraging comment for the person who linked up before you. That’s the best part about this community.
And if you don’t have a blog, feel free to leave your five minutes of writing as a comment. And we’ll love on you there.
Today’s prompt is:

Red….

Go.

The scent kisses my lips 
just likes yours kiss mine
in the nighttime air
I kick off my red heels
and you take red scent
and stick it in my hair
we dance around
so happy and free

Red dresses 
and white 
an isle
a man at the end
tears and fears
are shared
and a kiss
seals the deal

the wand sweeps
every so carefully
over the nail
and coats it
in a beautiful
burst of red

cries are heard
a mother runs 
to pick up her child
red is left on the pavement
as a testament
to the incident that
just took place

Red takes many many forms
but the red
that dripped out of his body
as he prayed
as he wept allowed
his body, broken
beaten and bruised
hung on a tree 
that red changed my life
and I hope that it changed yours too

STOP



27 comments:

  1. Oh, I really like the different scenes/meanings of the word red here in poetic form. Great way to use the prompt.

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    1. thanks for your comment. I really love poetry and so I try and use it whenever I can and usually the prompts for FMF are a great way to do that.

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  2. Woah! Beautiful! Love this!! So creative!

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  3. Amen, Jessica! Beautiful. Such a great writing for Five Minute Friday! Hope you have a great day and weekend!!

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  4. I love it! I wish I could write poems :) .... thank you for sharing

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    1. you can do anything you set your mind too!! if you write a poem and post it, I would love to read it and give you feedback!

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  5. Beautiful, Jessica! Have a wonderful weekend!

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  6. I love the lyrical flow of your words here! Great post. :-)

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  7. I am amazed every week by those of you that can write such beautiful poems in 5 mins. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. thank you! I just write where I am lead. its really not that hard.

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  10. Beautiful poem! I love that we both saw red through the experiences of Jesus.

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  11. Oh my! That is beautiful! I love it!! Thanks for sharing!!

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  12. Girl--this was FANTASTIC!!! loved it...so many emotions expressed here. Oh the glory...

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  13. What a beautiful poem! Amazing that you have such a talent. And btw, I sold my red corvette after I married my husband. It was fine for the single gal but ...

    Blessings and love,
    Debbie

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    1. thanks Debbie for stopping by! and too bad you couldn't pass that red corvette onto me as I am single :)

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  14. So beautiful! You sure have a way with words :)

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  15. This is beautiful, Jessica. Have a lovely day!

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Thanks for stopping by! I read and try to reply to every comment. Have a blessed day!! :)